very immature ... you do well to hone those sentences of yours .. nice emotion; but the words lack the punch to hit the reader in the stomach as he/she reads it .. think about your emotion; ruminate on it .. think of words , not just think, picturise the words; give them depth; charecter and personalities ; then write it down; you will see the difference yourself .. Apologies if Ive spoken too much :)
Thanx once again..the same case here...just a thought came and penned it..didnt think much about words..will try to do..no apologies required..comments always welcome :)
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very immature ... you do well to hone those sentences of yours .. nice emotion; but the words lack the punch to hit the reader in the stomach as he/she reads it .. think about your emotion; ruminate on it .. think of words , not just think, picturise the words; give them depth; charecter and personalities ; then write it down; you will see the difference yourself .. Apologies if Ive spoken too much :)
Thanx once again..the same case here...just a thought came and penned it..didnt think much about words..will try to do..no apologies required..comments always welcome :)
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